I’m working on a short story now. My friend took a look at it and broke it into pieces. But, that’s okay. I’ve learned that you can’t take things so personally and you need to let your work go to improve it. What I need to work on is my senses – taste, smell, touch, sight, hearing. I need to bring my story to life. I have a deadline of next Friday, so I’ll let you know how it goes.