It’s been a good month or so since I’ve been to my critique group due to various events that came up in my hectic life. Yesterday, I was finally able to go with my revised first chapter, and besides a few bad cliches, I did pretty well.
After supper, the urge to do my corrections hit hard. I changed those cliches, took care of some past tenses and I can see a big difference already.
Looking forward to correcting chapter two.